tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208807733342075660.post648515103073846572..comments2024-01-29T04:22:11.107+01:00Comments on Natasa's blog: 31DBBB Day 1 - My Elevator PitchNatasahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12048765349737400507noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208807733342075660.post-91289481576746948602009-04-16T01:27:00.000+02:002009-04-16T01:27:00.000+02:00Thanks Karenne. Glad you like both of them.Thanks Karenne. Glad you like both of them.Natasahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12048765349737400507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208807733342075660.post-86057511283912186782009-04-15T22:35:00.000+02:002009-04-15T22:35:00.000+02:00the wordle is just darn cute but I agree with jesa...the wordle is just darn cute but I agree with jesamakateli, the short one is concise and tells exactly who you are what you do.<br /><br />But your second version, above is spicier (without the food references of course LOL).<br /><br />xKarenneKALINAGO ENGLISHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15202016406865561740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208807733342075660.post-10363542201255913632009-04-11T00:54:00.000+02:002009-04-11T00:54:00.000+02:00Something like: "I am an EFL teacher, a lifelong l...Something like: "I am an EFL teacher, a lifelong learner, a creative writer and a Web 2.0 enthusiast. I blog because blogging makes me happy. I cook with common ingredients, but I end up creating a new dish." I hope it is intriguing rather than confusing. I need to work on it more. Your comment about convincing the readers that they can benefit from my service is really important. <BR/>I was thinking about starting another blog where I would do some creative writing, but I need to decide how I am going to do it. Thanks for the encouragement, it means a lot to me.Natasahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12048765349737400507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4208807733342075660.post-68841950785252221832009-04-10T10:36:00.000+02:002009-04-10T10:36:00.000+02:00I think the short one is great; it is concise and ...I think the short one is great; it is concise and explains who you are and what you do. But I also liked the 'using the same ingredients to create different dishes' bit. Perhaps you could incorporate it? My only other comment would be that a good elevator speech lets the listener know how they would benefit from your service; which is really important when you're trying to make money from whatever it is you're promoting.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for visiting me; I've enjoyed your blogs and I shall visit again.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com